Peer Edits- Editorial

Alley P.
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, you are in favor of stem cell research.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, says that it should be allowed and states reasons why.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
No.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes because it is a current issue/controversy.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes.

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes.

Rachel Cassada

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
I think so- that tution should be less? Or inflation should decrease?

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
There isn't a solution stated.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
No.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes because it applies to most high school students.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes.

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes.